Ala Carte Services

I offer many services to suit your needs:

Ten-Page Critiques
For an author that wants just a few pages copy edited or a quick evaluation of how their manuscript looks to someone that has never seen it before. I will check your pages to make sure you don't use any cliche narrative devices and help you polish those all too important first pages.

For critiques over ten pages, up to 20k words, please purchase as many ten page blocks as you need to cover your project. Your ten pages should have 1" margins all around, Times New Roman font, be double spaced, and saved as a Word .doc file.

Synopsis Critiques
For the author that hates writing the oft-dreaded synopsis and needs someone with no history of your project to read it and make sure you haven't completely flubbed it. I do many different synopsis lengths, including one page, two page, and four pages (single spaced.) For five page, seven page, or ten pages, please choose two synopsis packages.

Query help
For the author that wants an intern's insider opinion about your query letter. One-pass help is free, or two-pass help is only $35.

Send your best query effort to me like you would send it to an agent. Please also include the first 250 words, embed both in the email, and the line, "I chose to query you based on how adorable your dog MolliePup is." so I know you are looking for a critique.

Submissions packages
For the author that is ready to query and wants an evaluation of their query letter and the first ten pages from an intern's perspective.

Half-hour chat sessions 
For in-depth questions or brainstorming. I have most of the popular IM platforms, or we can set up a secure chatzy. A one hour chat session is free for anyone who purchases a full edit.

My turnaround time is about 48 hours per block or service. They do not need to be scheduled in advance.

Two services are $60 total
Three services are $80 total
Four or more are $25 each.


Please choose:

Don't have Paypal?
Other payment methods accepted:
  • Venmo @Cassandra-Brown-53
  • Personal checks (held for ten days)
  • Chase QuickPay (Only if you have a Chase account)
  • Concealed cash (Not recommended)
If you know of any better methods of payments, please do let me know!